The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/06
Through your writing, I can see expressions of humility, expressions of God's forgiveness, expressions of the very truths and promises that God has given us. He is our Rock and Redeemer, and He is always there for us. May God continue to shine His grace and His mercy through your writing. Thank you for sharing it.
01/21/06
Very nice :)
Beautiful message, Garnet! and the rhyme scheme is different and interesting. Thank you for this lovely poem.
I liked this very much - there is a lyrical quality to this that makes it feel like a praise song. Perhaps a little polishing needed, but I almost want to hum this! God bless.
01/21/06
A beautiful poem of praise! 'Then I remember the “treasure” of grace,
Within this unworthy jar of clay;
Your hand reaches deep, my anguish to find,
And peace is left in its space' This stanza is my favorite!
Your poem was a joy to read