The Official Writing Challenge
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01/17/06
I liked this style. Great descriptions and it tied together so well. Nice ending too!:)
This is so nicely constructed, and tenderly written. It flows very well, and the hurts and pains of each of the characters is captured nicely through each of the little 'windows' through which we see them. God bless.
01/22/06
I loved how you tied all three little stories together! Excellent descriptions too, especially for such a short amount of space to write each little story. You really have the talent to become a remarkable writer!
Each of these stories were touching on their own, and added together made a wonderful article. Well done!