The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/06
Nice story but "Reader Unfriendly" - which means paragraphing would make it so much easier for a Reader to read and absorb. Thanks for sharing!
01/19/06
I apologize that the paragraph breaks didnot past into Faithwriters the way I wrote this piece in Microsoft Word. Thank you for reading this and your reviews.