The Official Writing Challenge
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What a wonderful perspective!
Wondeful! You brought it out wonderfully and I will think of this whenever I read the account.
I love it! I enjoy reading anything to do with Biblical accounts and retellings! Great perspective into his life!
Excellent. I love the took me a moment to realize what was happening!
I was a little confused to begin with as well - but this was really good. A lovely re-telling of this story. God bless.
Beautiful! Anointed. Thank you for writing this...
It's the ending that really pulls this one home. Most excellent conclusion! Congrats on your win!
Well done Sue, this was fabulous. I sense that you too have looked into the eyes of Jesus and know of His love for you.
Congrats on your EC win. This was great! Well done.
The conclusion of this story really pushed it over the top. A great retelling with enough extra to make it special. Congratulations!
This is just beautiful. Congratulations on your win. It is well deserved.
It was obvious where it was going, but it was written with such entertaining flair, one couldn't help but smile at the retelling.
Congratulatons! I love it when a Writer who tells a story from the Bible wins! I always get choked up when I re=read about Jesus life on Earth...Thank you!