The Official Writing Challenge
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01/19/06
Very well written, and I love the subtlety of your ending.
01/19/06
Since I know the background of this story - it makes it all the more precious. Absolutely precious. You did a really good job on this Terri. Very well done! I hope you submit it somewhere with a footnote.
I really enjoyed reading this. Not what I expected when I started it. When the pastor asked if anyone was up to the challenge? Wow. I have never seen that at a funeral. But wish it was asked more often. Wonderfully written piece.
01/20/06
Well done and a reminder that we never know when we're going Home.
Controlled and beautiful - deeply touching. God bless.
01/20/06
Wow, gave me goosebumps! You captured the confusion of grief very well. And I love the title!
01/21/06
Wow ... that took a couple of unexpected turns. Very strong writing, and great abilities!
01/22/06
Absolutely not what I expected at the end. Well done.