The Official Writing Challenge
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05/21/17
Poignant and touching entry, with a great message.

Blessings~
05/22/17
I liked you approach very much. You had a good hook and it drew me in right off.

As a principal, I was always addressing bullying at my schools. Demeaning words are as cruel as a punch in the face.

You did a good job at the first half, but I wished you would have continued with showing how it affected her throughout her life using active examples instead of just passive accounts.

It was a very good story and teaching tool. God bless.