The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/05
Well written piece and very touching. Thanks for sharing.
Your ending gave me a cold chill and it was not from the breeze blowing in my window. We know not the hour or day but being ready is part of our promise to Him!
Thanks for your story!
01/18/06
Boo hoo! Wonderful ending! I think this flowed and was so nicely done. Thank you!
01/19/06
What a lovely piece. The ending was indeed a surprise and very ingenious.
'In the blink of an eye, we shall all be changed..' You have captured that so perfectly here. Lovely! God bless.
01/20/06
This story was very well written, but most, it went straight to the heart where its message has profoundly touched me. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing and for sharing God's message to us- through you.
01/20/06
Whoa...brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful!! You pulled me in deftly, and painted the compassion she felt for her grandson beautifully.