The Official Writing Challenge
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Can't wait!!
A lovely message in this poem. We look forward to that time when all that was painful is past and He can receive us into His heavenly home so that we can spend the rest of the "Years in Glory". Thanks for this beautiful poem.
01/19/06
Great internal rhyme scheme, wondrous message. If you re-visit this, a few adjustments in meter would improve the flow a bit. What glorious hope!
01/19/06
'From the depths of our despair, we shall rise into the air,' Favorite line! Yes - can't wait! Great reminder of hope!
Well done!
01/20/06
I'm with Pat!
01/20/06
Ditto! What a great day that will be!
01/20/06
I second Jan's comments. Hallelujah, it will be unimaginable!!! See you there! =)
01/20/06
Very nice picture here :)
01/20/06
I've said it before... I really appreciate poetry. It's sooo hard to write! I certainly can't do it! But I totally appreciated this message. Great job!
Ten thousand years in glory! You're making this traditional worshipper almost ready to shout, Pup! Bless you!!