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Very touching yet very sad. Age is a tricky thing. You have portrayed it very well.
How beautifully you went through the different stages of your life and the memories that you now have as you have arrived at a lonely time in your life. Many of us can identify with your experiences even if we are a little way off, but approaching the time. Jesus gives us the courage to hold on until that time. Well written.
01/18/06
This beautifully described our journey to home. I got abit sad as I am at the soon to be empty nester but have that hope. Very nice:)
01/20/06
Almost Home! You've hit the nail on the head! So beautiful, So true, So touching! I loved the "I no longer HAVE a home, I'm IN a home"! Today is my birthday and I'm of the age I don't like to think about it...but I traveled with you every step of the way through your story of growing old; I felt you were telling MY story. Well Done!