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Very touching yet very sad. Age is a tricky thing. You have portrayed it very well.
01/16/06
How beautifully you went through the different stages of your life and the memories that you now have as you have arrived at a lonely time in your life. Many of us can identify with your experiences even if we are a little way off, but approaching the time. Jesus gives us the courage to hold on until that time. Well written.
01/18/06
This beautifully described our journey to home. I got abit sad as I am at the soon to be empty nester but have that hope. Very nice:)
01/20/06
Almost Home! You've hit the nail on the head! So beautiful, So true, So touching! I loved the "I no longer HAVE a home, I'm IN a home"! Today is my birthday and I'm of the age I don't like to think about it...but I traveled with you every step of the way through your story of growing old; I felt you were telling MY story. Well Done!