The Official Writing Challenge
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01/16/06
What a lovely story! You carried the reader along with you and the happiness in your house that took seven years to build made it all worth while over the wait for it to be completed. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story.
01/18/06
I could relate well to this being the wife of a contractor who took years to finish building out old home.:) Nice story..I was there with you waiting. I might add some commas in the second sentence though to break it up somewhat.
A lovely and cherished memory - a little polishing needed perhaps, but not enough to distract from how sweet this was. God bless.