The Official Writing Challenge
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01/12/06
Oh, very good! As I was reading, the sentence "Funny how only the foundation survived" caught my eye. I'm glad that turned out to be the theme of your piece.
The theme of foundations is woven into very well and leads beautifuly into the bible verse. Well structured and nicely written, God bless.