The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
Oh, how utterly beautiful! Such a great way to witness what prayer can do! I am still wiping my eyes, blowing my nose, and in general - being the perfect example of what sensitive Readers will be doing as they read your story. Excellent! Very well written and thank you! Kudos!
01/11/06
Written with a very readable style, and I was highly engaged from beginning to end.

I don't know much about social work, but I was puzzled that your protagonist didn't report the beatings. Seems like she'd be required to do so. If this is fiction, I wonder if that might need clarification. If it's an actual account, well, you know more than I!

I love your title--it's a real grabber and a great way to think of prayer.
Very well written; though I too felt a little uncomfortable on the subject of the beatings. But a lovely way to think of prayer. God bless.
01/12/06
You described her concerns and fears well..I once was a counselor in D.C. area and well understand her trepidation..but loved the idea of her 'angel'. Nicely written.