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He does provide ways out...I liked your story. My heart ached for the older man..
01/09/06
Such a Beautiful story! I am hoping it is true and not fictional! Either way, it is very well written and left me in tears....of joy. Well done.
01/09/06
Such a Beautiful story! I am hoping it is true and not fictional! Either way, it is very well written and left me in tears....of joy. Well done.
This story, fictional or not, is poignant and full of human drama. Thank you for tackling a dilemma and showing the struggle, the often silent turmoil, we go through and how we wrestle with and challenge God. Thanks, too, for depicting His movements in our lives. Well done!
I think the best thing about this story is that...it could be true! It's very realistic and believable. It is well-written and makes you step into the character's shoes, whether you have any common ground with that character or not. I just knew it would have a happy ending. Well done!