The Official Writing Challenge
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01/09/06
Cute
Oh yes, very cute - 'Roll up, roll up, Get your Holy Spirit here!' Nicely constructed, very wry and I'm smiling: what more does a girl need? God bless.
I would like to see this ad on T.V...I like your unique entry...
01/09/06
I Love this...wonderful.You`ve made my heart merry,Jesus must be smiling too.Well done.
01/09/06
Top notch writing here!
I love it! I can hear the sound bite in my head.
01/17/06
Hey, this is good. I agree with everyone else. Why not get it on a radio ad for a Christian station? Unique, almost witty, crafty... The ending was neat - left me smiling. Good "punchline"