The Official Writing Challenge
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This had a really strong start - and then it was over! I would really liked to have known why you were so keen to 'escape' from this situation, what was causing the doubts - or perhaps self-doubt. Keep writing, God bless.
This was too short and didn't give me enough information to understand the situation. You have a real knack for writing, I would just like to see a piece like this developed further.
01/13/06
My wife is the head of our Children's Ministry, so I can relate to the need to 'escape' from time to time on Sunday mornings (for me it's usually to the church kitchen for a cup of coffee...shhh, don't tell anyone).
Isn't if great that our Lord will never leave us or forsake us? Keep planting the seeds.
Good piece.
I liked this piece very much. It flows smoothly and you seemed to have a definite destination in mind. However, like the other commentators, I think it needs to be fleshed out. This is a good start for a strong story. It deserves further development. Go for it! Lucile