The Official Writing Challenge
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02/27/16
Most original. I like the subtle humor.
03/02/16
Very creative. I enjoyed the humor sprinkled throughout.
I think this is quite clever. I'm not sure you needed the disclaimer at the beginning, but I understand it. You have a delightful sense of humor. I almost choked on the cloud line--simply brilliant. I wasn't sure if it would be spot on topic because it's more of a letter than actual mail, but then you sent it email and it worked perfectly. I truly enjoyed it. I often will go into God's mind. I know some people hesitate about that, but if that's how the Spirit is promoting you, go for it. Nicely done.
I think this is quite clever. I'm not sure you needed the disclaimer at the beginning, but I understand it. You have a delightful sense of humor. I almost choked on the cloud line--simply brilliant. I wasn't sure if it would be spot on topic because it's more of a letter than actual mail, but then you sent it email and it worked perfectly. I truly enjoyed it. I often will go into God's mind. I know some people hesitate about that, but if that's how the Spirit is promoting you, go for it. Nicely done.
03/03/16
Congratulations, Ruth, on winning 1st place in the Intermediate category. I loved the wit and wisdom in your piece.
Congratulations on ranking 1st in your level and 14 overall. Happy Dance.
This was very creative - Outside the box. I really enjoyed this. Congrats on your 1st place win!
03/22/16
You did a great job creating a believable communication.
Congratulations on your level win~write on!
03/22/16
Oh I forgot to mention- very funny to boot.