The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/16
Wow! I loved this...great job, and excellent dialogue!

Love the ending...

God bless~
01/29/16
The ending left a lump in my throat. Brilliant!
02/03/16
Very enjoyable story to read. I'm sure it's difficult for adoptive families to meld together.

You wrote several times Mom Stacy. You don't need to write Mom. Stacy will suffice.

Your ending came as a pleasant surprise. Didn't see that coming. Nice job.
02/04/16
I'm not sure if this is fiction or non-fiction. Either way, it is a wonderful story.

I admire anyone with hearts big enough to take on the challenge of emotionally damaged children and heal them with God's love.

The ending was a real surprise too. My grandkids call me Momma Claire so if I were writing I would always preface Claire with Momma...so I beg to differ with one of the comments.

This is a well-deserved win. Congratulations!
02/04/16
Congratulations, Trudy, on your 3rd place in the Intermediate Category.

I'm glad the two brothers found each other in the end.
Congratulations!
This is grabbing. Great dialogue. Congrats!