The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/05
At first read, I thought this a Blessing at meal time. Then I began to wonder if I was mistaken as I read on. Then, near the end I knew it was a tree! A beautiful way for one of God's most beautiful creations, the tree, to praise Him! This was lovely. I liked it and you did a fine job!
12/14/05
Well-written extended metaphor. Very beautiful prayer.
Clever!