The Official Writing Challenge
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12/15/05
Very Good.
I think you made a good effort to compare a Christian to a tree, but it needs to be more clearly structured. You jumped around from idea to idea and illustration to illustration and I got confused. Also, I don't see your illustration of the boat as a tree when Jesus commanded the waves and the wind to be calm. How is that tied to a tree?