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TITLE: The Invisible Form of Water--God | Previous Challenge Entry
By Emily Ritter
12/10/15
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I was rushing to work like every other day, fastening my coat belt, trying not to step out of my flats, striding through muddy patches toward the tutoring center.

My shift was over in an hour, uneventful bit. The stroll back to my car was as moseying as the jaunt to work was rushed. I had no where to be.

And I quite liked the way the mud beneath my quarter inch sole squished with each step. I walked slower and slower as if coming to a stop, and toddled to the left and right as a dancer in warm-up.

The sun warmed the bare back of my shoulder that peeked from my spring jacket. I was happy, but not the kind of happy that cut flowers bring.

I knew someone. Someone, surprisingly invisible. And in my mosey, I was not alone. Walking together felt like pirouetting in cool mist. I inhaled as we walked, cooling my lungs, quenching my thirst.

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