The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/05
Alot of effort went into this poetic Challenge regarding "trees"; and it was well done, even if it did not flow perfectly in every verse. You told the story of the tree so well, and the different varieties. Very interesting, very informative and a very good job. I liked it. Thank you for sharing and God BLess.
12/14/05
This is wonderful! The line "All enjoying God’s winters’features" seems awkward. Also, the transition from the trees to man at the end is worthy of a greater explanation. I did enjoy reading this!