The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the ending. Good job with leading to the conclusion which had an important message attached.

God bless~
This is a good story for this week's theme. I especially liked the ending. Thank you.
Boy could I ever relate to this story. I'm sure most women can, will, or have!

It is well written too with an enjoyable ending! Good luck this week.

God Bless,

M.C. Syben
I can certainly relate and many other women can as well. Enjoyed the entire story from beginning to end.
I can totally relate to this MC. You did a wonderful job of laying out the conflict, pulling the reader in, and building suspense.
Trudy, Congratulations on your first place win in the Intermediate division. I could certainly identify with your MC. The opening pulled me in to the story. The ending was a perfect touch.
Hey Trudy, Great job with this - and congrats on your win.
Next step - Advanced!
Keep growing and God bless.
Going to doctors' offices to get blood drawn without a doubt is a big deterrent to making an appointment! Congrats on your article. "Grate" subject choice!