The Official Writing Challenge
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11/26/15
I loved the ending. Good job with leading to the conclusion which had an important message attached.

God bless~
11/29/15
This is a good story for this week's theme. I especially liked the ending. Thank you.
11/30/15
Boy could I ever relate to this story. I'm sure most women can, will, or have!

It is well written too with an enjoyable ending! Good luck this week.

God Bless,

Claire
M.C. Syben
11/30/15
I can certainly relate and many other women can as well. Enjoyed the entire story from beginning to end.
I can totally relate to this MC. You did a wonderful job of laying out the conflict, pulling the reader in, and building suspense.
Trudy, Congratulations on your first place win in the Intermediate division. I could certainly identify with your MC. The opening pulled me in to the story. The ending was a perfect touch.
12/04/15
Hey Trudy, Great job with this - and congrats on your win.
Next step - Advanced!
Keep growing and God bless.
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