The Official Writing Challenge
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12/12/05
I loved this. I loved the picture, and subtle message that developed into the main message. I'm glad I read this today - it's beautiful.
I agree. I love the progression and the message.
12/13/05
I really liked this. The leaf, the stem and the tree...I was waiting for one more verse; ...Consider the root. However, I still liked it; much thought went into this piece, and very nicely done also.
12/14/05
Very nicely done. One tiny error: "its" instead of "it's" (which reads the same as "it is").

Beautiful poem with a well-thought-out progression.
Oh, I loved this too! The progression carries the reader on a reflective journey that's gentle, insightful, and inspiring!
12/16/05
Beautiful!

I wish my poinsettia would take note ... its leaves are falling off one by one these days.....

Well done.
Loved this and the underlying message of life and growth and connectedness. Great job!!

Consider the other trees that came before....the community of life....the ongoing creation....the promise of more trees.

Got me thinking...... :-)