The Official Writing Challenge
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01/18/05
You did a brilliant job portraying strong emotion. I tend to agree,however,death is but a temporary situation in which Jesus has broken the cords. First love doesn't dictate only love or last love. In heaven there will be no male or female. We will not be given in marriage it will be a different world than the one that we live in now.Never the less it is a fine piece of writing.
Loved the imagery of this line
The beauty of true love, like a rose, caresses the senses, embraces tenderness, and invokes feelings of serenity.
There is no way to escape the feeling of what you expressed in these words.
Deep and heavy, but I could relate to what you were saying. God bless you.
01/23/05
powerful piece