The Official Writing Challenge
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Captivating and well told. Keep up the good work!
12/13/05
Gorgeous! What a lovely plot, and your descriptions are just beautiful. Well done!
12/14/05
I like this story! Intriguing and fun to the end. Good writing!
12/14/05
This is sweet and well-written. I guess there was no way, given the word limitation, to build suspense in the readers--we all knew who the secret admirer was. If you expand this, consider having your readers discover the secret admirer at the same time that Beth does. This is a very precious mini-romance!
This was beautiful and such an enjoyable read. Yes, we all knew who the secret admirer was, but we enjoyed waiting for Beth to find out, and hoping that she wouldn't reject him. Well done!
12/18/05
Enjoyed this romantic and creative use of 'tree!' Very well done and of course it ended just perfect! Good characters and dialogue. Thanks so much for not leaving us with a 'well maybe' kind of ending!
12/21/05
Cute Deni! Really sweet! I thoroughly enjoyed this. :) Karen