The Official Writing Challenge
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12/13/05
Delightful! I liked it! It has that certain ring to it; not exactly rhyme per se..but "something" I could feel...and it had so much truth. Yes, you did a good job describing trees...and it gave ME thoughts...even if the Author claims he or she doesn't think about trees. (Smile) Very nicely written with a splash of Creativity that stays with the Reader./ Thanks for sharing.
12/14/05
I love your 4th and 5th stanzas. Consider making them the certerpiece for a poem with a different mood entirely.
12/14/05
I like the fact that you recognize the living hope that the trees give you, but it contradicts the premise that you do not think about trees.