The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow, a beautiful tribute to your mother. Not sure if you want a critique, so I'll leave it at that, but if you do, just PM me.
12/12/05
Until the end I didn't know who or what these beautiful words were being spoken to, or about...and then at the very end I knew; but had to go back and re-read in order to capture your thoughts. I, too, miss my Mother; I wish you could somehow have made me know "up front" that this was about your Mother..then I believe I would have appreciated it more. But it was lovely. A fond and dear memory worded so beautifully. Very Nice!
Absolutely beautiful! Even if you had not specified who it was, this poem would still be very evocative.
12/16/05
A loving tribute. The phrase "patient as a Ponderosa" is priceless! Thanks so much for this.
12/18/05
So beautitful and lovely to read. I loved the flow, of words and love.