The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/15
very creative piece - I loved it
07/24/15
What a creative approach. Though your daughter wasn't actually on a vacation, I did love the concept.

Very clever approach and the hashtags were a fantastic touch. I could see this piece in a devotional for young people.
07/25/15
I love your creative sense of fun here, though (TSK TSK!) a little more research might have shown you that back in Jesus' time they had radio! I've seen the ruins from then - and they are all "wireless!"
But seriously, this is great writing, especially with your hashtags.
07/25/15
You've managed to craft a piece of brilliance! I adored this piece and the vivid descriptions coinciding with Biblical passages and references.

Excellent and super job!

GOd bless~
07/26/15
What a pleasant, crafty trip through the life of Christ, and you kept your sense of humor throughout. The hashtags and the ending make this piece shine:) Well done!
07/27/15
What a unique and interesting take on the topic. I too have wondered why in films, Jesus and the disciples are usually white men speaking perfect English. Your final paragraph concluded this piece perfectly.
07/27/15
That was a very enjoyable piece. I loved the touches of humor with the hashtags, and then the way you wrapped up the conclusion with the fact that someday we will see face to face. A great message with an engaging presentation!
07/28/15
Well I did enjoy reading this one and laughing to myself over your photo captions. Thank you for sharing your creative message.
07/31/15
Congratulations Cindy!
I was hoping this would have rated higher, but so happy you received recognition!

Well done,

God bless~