The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the conversational voice you used to talk to your reader.
A couple of technical critiques:
- Space down a line between your paragraphs to make them more distinct and easier to read.
- "OK.," -- I think the punctuation on that should be different
- "I never ate" -- should be "I have never eaten"
- Watch out for sentence fragments (A fun tourist trap)

Overall, it makes me want to visit these places!
An invitation to Maine that lures the reader making us want to vacation there for sure!

I enjoyed your story. Thanks.

God bless~
This was an enjoyable road trip up the Maine coast. Your descriptions brought back vivid memories of familiar sights and stops. I was a little confused by the narration style; I couldn't decide if it was a one way conversation, a "homey" brochure, or a travel blog post. Overall, a good snapshot of Maine. I can't wait to go back!
I felt like I was back in Maine. I enjoyed your story!