The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a well-written piece. I like your use of descriptive words in the piece. This story had a nice flow.
Congratulations!
Congratulations on your first place win in the Intermediate Division and 9th place win in the Editor's Choice Awards.

06/14/15
This is a really good reminder of Who is in control! Well written.