The Official Writing Challenge
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Perhaps instead of focussing on the feelings and attributes of Christmas, you could have left it to maybe a paragraph or so and went into thorough description about how spring makes people feel and act. Otherwise a good piece! Thanks for sharing!
12/07/05
You write: Everyone’s attitude changes when Spring comes. The world seems to come alive..., but you've described winter as a very lively time already. I'm with Jezreel, more spring is needed here. You're obviously a good writer, re-visit this one and keep 'em coming!
12/08/05
I would have liked to see a little more about spring also. I don't know how you would consolidate all of those thoughts about winter and Christmas into one or two paragraphs. Maybe this is two different articles packed into one? Good reflections on human attitudes!
12/08/05
Your title, "The Hectic Season", doesn't spell out Spring for me. It would have been a smash two weeks ago when the subject was "winter". Thank you for sharing your talent with us.