The Official Writing Challenge
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06/04/15
Interesting story. It is right on topic.
This is one of my favorites so far. I think you did a wonderful job of painting vivid descriptions of the way the world may have formed. I think your out-of-the-box POV was brilliant. I have often wondered what this time before the Fall might have been like and you did a great job.
06/11/15
Congratulations on your highly commended placement.
06/22/15
Nice! I could see the joy of God as He imagined and created. I liked the interaction between Him and Lucifer. Well done!