The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the dialog between the M.C. and God. It seemed sincere.
Very creative! I really enjoyed reading this piece. Keep up the good work.

God Bless
This is a precious interaction with God. I could easily picture this taking place. My only red ink would be to use the exclamation points sparingly. In a piece this size, one is enough. Let your beautiful choice of words do the exclaiming for you. You definitely covered the topic and delivered a great message.
Congratulations on your highly commended award.