The Official Writing Challenge
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What a masterful piece of work this is!!! May I suggest that you publish this down to earth, inspiring story...and whomever you decide to submit it to, never surrender your originality because your gift of writing demonstrates the breath of God.
12/07/05
It really shows you what's important doesn't it?

I agree with the others, it should be in print.

Great story!
12/07/05
This is a Wow entry and I agree, this should be submitted somewhere! It's so great on so many levels. I loved it! (can relate too - my daughter plays softball! :) )
12/07/05
Well written. A fun story to read. And a wonderful lesson as a bonus.
12/07/05
Bravo--Shelley is a very realistically written teenager. Super!
Good story, well done.
12/08/05
Aside from the little "typo blooper" in "you have all the tools"... it's a terrific father and daughter story, and I loved it! Both characters were sensitive and both were sensible. Very nice job...and makes an important point! Kudos~
12/10/05
Well written story with a great message. Great job.