The Official Writing Challenge
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Awwww a sweet story! Some tightening needed in grammar, but otherwise I really enjoyed this (I have my own "city kid")
12/07/05
Good job!
Very enjoyable. I once took my dog to a session with a teenage client and the effects were amazing. Good job.
12/14/05
Oh, Lucille! I loved your story! How did I miss it, I'll never know! I read so many each week! It was really a delightful and great story...and kept my interest to the end. AND, you made the top 30 List - Congratulations! You've been such an encouragement to me, I'm sorry I was late with my comments to you! Keep up the good work! God bless!
Lucille, you are a prolific writer. I love the title. I wanted the story to continue, as though it were not yet finished. I found myself wanting to read more about "Murph". I'm glad to find your writing at Faith Writers!