The Official Writing Challenge
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Have you considered rewriting your story in more depth, sharing the lessons and blessing of that difficult time? Try varying the grammer and sentence structure and watch for repetitious wording.
12/07/05
I'd love to read more about this? What were the circumstances behind your first move? What happened to change them at the gun show? You've got a great start here, but filling in the details would help a lot.