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12/05/05
Very nice thoughts! You captured her emotions very well. I liked the scripture you used with this.
12/06/05
Very well written story of real life - and I, too, loved the Bible verse that made it all come together nicely. God speaks to us in a wee small voice...to let us know He does care.
12/06/05
Nice job expressing Jenny's feelings! Any one of those three major crises in a person's life would cause a person to waver in their faith. When you introduced the little girl at the door, for some strange reason I thought of Frank Peretti's book 'Tilly', where another little girl causes healing to take place.
Take care using the word 'it' without an antecedent, the noun to which 'it' refers.
Good use of the Bible verse to bring hope; the heart sometimes takes a lot longer to completely thaw, however. Thank you for sharing this story.
Very well done. You brought me close to tears with the little girl at the door.
12/07/05
...For a while she had been angry with God, but now she was just plain numb. She wondered if He even listened to her anymore...

This is eloquent. So glad you put the hope at the end. Nicely written.
12/08/05
You brought about the wonder and awe of God in little things, like the little girl and little flowers. Nothing or no one is insignificant to
God. I liked your aritlce a lot. Thank you.