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12/07/05
A very good piece here that could be used in a children's book! I enjoyed!
12/07/05
Praise God! Truly an insight into the heart of a child. Well-written and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing, and God bless.

Kevin
12/07/05
I like this very much as allegory, (each animal representing a human characteristic), but I'm uneasy about it as a children's story. Foxes, fish, and birds don't actually experience faith, and I'd not want a child to think so. Perhaps a paragraph at the end comparing those animals to certain types of people would clarify the allegory aspect.
12/09/05
Interesting how you used each animal to represent each type of person. I'm glad I am the child and I pray for all the fishes, birds and foxes in my life.. Nice Job.