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A very good piece here that could be used in a children's book! I enjoyed!
Praise God! Truly an insight into the heart of a child. Well-written and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing, and God bless.

Kevin
12/07/05
I like this very much as allegory, (each animal representing a human characteristic), but I'm uneasy about it as a children's story. Foxes, fish, and birds don't actually experience faith, and I'd not want a child to think so. Perhaps a paragraph at the end comparing those animals to certain types of people would clarify the allegory aspect.
Interesting how you used each animal to represent each type of person. I'm glad I am the child and I pray for all the fishes, birds and foxes in my life.. Nice Job.