The Official Writing Challenge
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12/08/14
Much truth in this piece - truth all must grasp if they are to be saved.

I would have loved a bit more of a positive aspect to this, as the topic is meant to be inspirational.

Thanks for writing - and keep it up!
12/09/14
You have a truth filled article here, with much depth and meaning, and well expressed.

While the Word of God is always inspiring, Inspirational is a specific genre. Jan and Debra do a great job of helping me to understand the specifics of these genres. I've been surprised a few times that there was more to defining a genre than I thought.

I too think it could have used a more uplifting approach, as defined by Jan in her writing helps for this genre.