The Official Writing Challenge
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Ah, such a bittersweet story in verse. Lovely poem. You put your reader right there in Eden.
12/07/05
Bravo!
12/08/05
Sorry for the typos.. will try againe next time.
12/08/05
This is beautiful. You have a way of bringing the reader right in. Great job.
12/10/05
This was beautifully done. A few commas in unusual places threw me off a little.
I can't wait to read more, Ed! WELL DONE!
12/10/05
Such a pleasure to read! You have such talent for retelling the stories so poetically. A real blessing. Beautiful!
12/11/05
What a loss! A clear and engaging poem. Yeggy