The Official Writing Challenge
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12/05/05
Not sure where you're going with this commentary. I'm not sure how the title works in either keep writing and remember the reader wants to understand what you're trying to get across.
12/07/05
In a paragraph this size, so many questions leave the reader frustrated. Consider re-working this; there's plenty of encouragement here.
12/07/05
Expand upon this for a later work in the devotionals. Remember to separate the thought lines with spacing, and continue each thought a little more. It was a good read, and thought provoking. Just needs a Little more.