The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
Great idea! Poetry formatted to look like a vine. And you wrote it well, too. I love it!
11/29/05
This is wonderful. I hope you send it to a poetry magazine or other literary magazine where poetry is truly appreciated.
12/02/05
I liked this much, keep up the good work.
12/03/05
Excellent! I suspect if you centered this poem, then adjusted here and there, this would look even more like a vine. Very creative! The repeated phrase "It is the vine" is a type of trellis on which the rest of the verses are supported. I see a lot of symbolism here. I loved this!