The Official Writing Challenge
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11/29/05
What a heartbreaking story and triumphant message! There are a number of small mistakes, but overall, this was a great entry.
12/01/05
I think a few words are missing from your last sentence, but that does not change the rich meaning in the story. We all feel like quitting sometimes when the going gets really tough. Then, we remember all of the past situations that God has brought us through and we begin to trust anew. Nice story:)
12/02/05
Boy could I relate to this one. That's what testimony is all about. How can I have a testimony without a "test". Although He sometimes seems far, he is always just a prayer away.
12/05/05
A testimony of triumph in the end. I too note that your last sentence is missing some words. But very good entry nevertheless.