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Heart-warming, with strong credibility and light touches of humour that kept me tuned in.

Great job that should rate well.
This made my heart smile. I loved it from start to finish.

Well done.

God bless~
Molto ben scritto. Sehr schon.
This is listed as "fiction" but I found it hard to really read it as fiction while it is being told as a "family member" and not just as an on looker.

It is told well but I would have rather had it told by an on looker.
Told so well you could just hear their accents and see the smiles on their faces. Well done! Blessings, LaVonne

God bless~
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