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08/15/14
Heart-warming, with strong credibility and light touches of humour that kept me tuned in.

Great job that should rate well.
08/18/14
This made my heart smile. I loved it from start to finish.

Well done.

God bless~
Molto ben scritto. Sehr schon.
This is listed as "fiction" but I found it hard to really read it as fiction while it is being told as a "family member" and not just as an on looker.

It is told well but I would have rather had it told by an on looker.
08/21/14
Told so well you could just hear their accents and see the smiles on their faces. Well done! Blessings, LaVonne
08/21/14
Congrats!

God bless~
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