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This flows very well and expresses the feelings clearly. Affecting stuff. God bless.
Very lovely, and full of hope.
Very nice! Loved the twisting and turning...the unknowns that require us to respond in FAITH. :-)

Well done; flows nicely; good point!!
Just beautiful, dear writer, so much truth in such a lovely poem! The rhythm and flow of this feels like the winding and tracing of vining lines or paths. You've woven your words just like vines!
Great job! You led us down a path of uncertainty and confusion and then those last two verses captured your message so beautifully. I love it!
Very effective poem. Your faith helps with the twists and turns that you encounter.
Nice poem! Always trust the Master to lead where He wants us to follow:)
'To lead me where I cannot see.' So difficult to do! But you capture the necessity so well. Lovely!
I could almost picture walking through one of those hedge mazes -but made of vines -well done :)
Beautiful poem that was beautifully done. Good job.
You've some beautiful imagery here - the twisting vines and the ways that God guides us. Well done.