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07/25/14
Beautiful story, with a powerful conclusion. Well done.

God bless~
07/26/14
You had my attention from the beginning to the end. I was in suspense why the character would be leaving and if she would actually do it. Nicely done. I this this is a very valuable peace for both men and women, but so many of us, women, married so young wanting to "grow up." In reality, we never gave ourselves time to go through the developmental phases. This is something I might use in a women's support group or counseling session.
Nice story. Strong message. Very well done.
Very real. I appreciate the sentiments expressed . . .

Congratulations!