The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/14
Well done! Creative and well written.

God bless~
Interesting situation. well written.

The truth is, I don't have to have anyone get me into trouble; I do it all by my self. I need to follow the Holy Spirit to keep from being in trouble all the time.

I felt the story could have had just a little more dramatic ending in the rescue but it was a readable story and the full plot wasn't uncovered until the end. Nice work.
06/10/14
Great job. I loved your MC, she (or was it a he?) was so realistic that I completely bought into the character. I loved that she thought about leaving Big Shot, but decided to help (with a few digs) even though she was a pretty rotten person.

Your dialogue was excellent and your ending was appropriate, although a bit abrupt.

Overall an excellent story that I'd love to see fleshed out with a longer word limit.

Thanks for sharing it with us.
06/13/14
Congratulations!

God bless~