The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/14
This story touched my heart so deeply. My BFF will be gone six years this upcoming June 13th, and I still miss her more than I can say.

I felt as if I was reading about the two of us. Laughing, kidding, singing...I'm typing this through my tears.

You say this is "fiction" but this story was authentic to me in every way. Well written, and friendship is a blessing from above...

Well done!

God bless~
This is beautiful. You intrigued me from the very beginning and I was eager to read on. You certainly nailed the topic and did it with style and class.

I noticed one tiny thing. In this line: Mrs. Hines, rearranged the desks and put Barb and I on...
It should be She put Barb and me on either side...
One way to check this is to take out the extra. You wouldn't say She put I on... But she put me on...
Other than that tiny thing, I think it was a well-written article. The emotions were so vivid, I was surprised to see it labeled fiction. I was sure you must have known that passion firsthand to write such a compelling story. Hugs
06/05/14
Congratulations!

I loved this story and am so glad to see you sitting with the winners!

Thank you again for sharing.

God bless~
06/05/14
Thank you to everyone who leaves me comments. They mean the world to me. God bless you!