The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
Awww. So cute. Thanks for this adorable story...I loved it.

God bless~
05/27/14
Oh, boy! I remember all of these stages.
It might have clinched your thought by going far enough to see the daughter actually dealing with a similar problem with her own, instead of just speculating.
I can so relate to that type of treatment from my daughters. For the most part they were good, but sometimes... You did a nice job covering the topic and I thoroughly enjoyed each word.
05/29/14
Congratulations!
God bless~