The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/14
Great job with this descriptive piece. Loved the ending.

Well done.

God bless~
Wow! What a powerful story. You made everyone feel so real from the demons to the MC. Your short sentences paced the story brilliantly and added to the urgency of the story. I found myself holding my breath. This is one of my all time favorites and brilliant piece of writing.
05/29/14
Congratulations!
This is getting to be a habit!

LOL...well done and well deserved.

God bless~